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                                             From Ash to Misty.

If only you were still with me now
Why did i let you go? How?

I guess i thought i’d just go with the flow
I guess i was too dense to know

that without you it is not the same
And i’d look back on the road in shame

I realise now the truth i hide
It pains me, when i could have told you, instead i lied

Will you come back to me like the dove?
Can i tell you that it’s you i love?
i really have no idea what kind of poetry this is, i'm not a poet ^^; can't there just be a general romance category?

this is just another short poem i did. i'm feeling ill n can't quite bring myself to pick up Reunion where i left off, not yet anyway, so this is something i did just now to relieve boredom. i was gonna say this is not AaML as such, but about half way through writing it i decided to go back, change some bits, and now i can say that this poem is from Ash to Misty, if showing perhaps a little more eloquence than would be expected of Ash ^^; lol

hope you like it.

btw the part with the dove, for those who haven't guessed, is kind of a religious reference to the dove that returned to Noah's ark, showing him that there was land and leading him in the right direction. also it was the only word i could think of at the time that rhymed with love ^^;
still though i think there is relevance. Ash has lost his way now, the viewing figures are down and the new series suck. he gets more miserable, doesn't have anyone to argue with or not very well anyway, doesn't really have anyone to tell him what to do, motivate and keep him moving, and so should Misty come back i think it would be a little like the dove to Noah - she'll pull him by the ear in the right direction, and that direction would ultimatley lead to them finally admitting they have feelings for each other. so far as i am aware they did that in Gotta Catch Ya Later but not clearly, they didn't actually say that they loved each other, but from what i understand they might as well have done.

hey, advanceshippers, when have Ash and May ever had a moment like that, eh? Pearlshippers when have Ash and Dawn ever come so close to each other? Orangeshippers...just dream on! when have Tracy and Misty ever shown any signs of anything other than friendship to each other? eh? NEVER is the answer, NEVER NEVER NEVER and they NEVER will. Pokeshipping is inevitable, it's going to happen, so get ready ;)
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UsannaOisio14 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2009
Omg that is just so sweet T_T Yep dream on Advanced/Pearl/Orange shippers because those shippings are so NOT gonna happen never! :D POKESHIPPING FOREVA :heart:
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :)

and yeah, agreed
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UsannaOisio14 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2009
you welcome :hug: :D
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ggg-2 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009
advanceshippers and pearlshippers and orangeshippers all need to die
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
lol well...maybe just be 're-educated' since killing would lead to paper work and legal battles n a whole lot of unnecessary trouble
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Cristy10101 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2008   Writer
If that were to happen Ash would be acting mature... and come on the creators have realize EVENTUALLY that Ash will have to get a girlfriend! :cough:Misty:cough:
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
quite a bit more mature i'd say ^^; but yh well we can just wait n hope
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Cristy10101 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2008   Writer
lol but yeah we will have to see, sadly.
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cutiecat01153 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2008   Writer
that was wonderfuly buetiful(i know i cant spell and im 15)
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
ty glad you liked it :) (and don't worry about the spelling thing, it's not for everyone)
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Blue-Ultimate Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008
in a poetic mood I see
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
well no, not really, i don't think i'm ever really in a poetic mood cos 95% of the time i don't like poetry. it's just sometimes, when i'm bored and have nothing to do the words that always form in my head at some point during that time take on a slightly more structured form, and that's when an attempt at poetry usually results. i don't pretend to be very good at it, usually i'm crap ^^;
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Blue-Ultimate Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2008
lol mmkay whatever you say... heh that rimes lol

but Yea I get that allot but i never seem to have any paper or word stuff around me when I do, especially when I am composing an entire musical inside my head of boredom.

and that sucks ]'(
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
lol i'm sure it does. i can't stand musicals, so i never go through that myself
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Blue-Ultimate Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2008
lol ['3
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AAMLLover Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Now thats what i call poetry it was great keep it up see you can vent your ideas into something other than fanficing now lol it was really good :)
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
lol ty, glad you liked it. really i had no ideas or anything for this, at least not until after i'd written the first couple of lines. just one of those random things that turns into something workable in the end.
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AAMLLover Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Yh most of the poems that i've written i don't plan them they just come into mind :)
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Feathers-Forever Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008
This is a very pretty poem! All people are poets deep down :D
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
lol i suppose they are. i guess some people just don't like going so deep so often
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Feathers-Forever Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008
Well I'm not a pitcularly deep person XD But poetry is a fun way to make words sound pretty :D!
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
yea i s';pose it is lol and i'm sure you're deep, i think everyone has hidden depths, just some people make them a bit...un-hidden sometimes.
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ElLonelyBoy Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008
:nod: Sweet, I can see Ash saying that to Misty. Love the little ethereal message you threw in there. :thumbsup:
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
ty vm :) glad it was understood. i actually only thought of the relevance after writing in the dove bit, cos i felt i needed a reason for doing so other than the fact that it rhymes and is meant to be a beautiful bird ^^;
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ElLonelyBoy Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008
Well, it was a great move, and it definitely works. Keep it up :thumbsup:;)
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oldpokeshipper Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008
oh, no... neverstoptrying, you've done it again... I'm crying... *cries* BUUUUU!!!! D
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
aw ty :)
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Yu-giMoto Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008
I think She will One Day :)
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Yu-giMoto Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008
Oh and I am not talking about Ash an Misty....

:D
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
oh? so who were you talking about then?
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Yu-giMoto Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008
.....*Shwirls Toe*..... One ^^;

She Will Come Back!! Promise!
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
...still lost, my cold must have clogged my brain up. still, u can explain tomorrow. if u get this before u get here though; it might be worth noting that the estate we live on is brand new, so might not be on a sat nav.
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Yu-giMoto Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008
lol OK Yea Ur brain might be acting a tad slow whilst clogged up with phlem dont worry u will get it when i give you 1 word :D

lol I Looked up ur house on Windows Live Maps and your house was the start of the Construction!!!! hahaha lol Living in a construction Site COOL!!!!

I Hope GPS Will Find it lol :XD:
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IsolatedSystem Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
lol well most of it's finished now, they're still screwing about with the roads on our end. if the GPS doesn't find us then give us a ring...come to think of it, do u have our new number? you'll probably not get this until it's too late but still.
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Yu-giMoto Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008
lol I Am in your Room as We speak!!
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